The Painting
“Sire will
be here in a bit. Please wait there,” said the butler, expressing a bit of
disgust at the unwanted disruption at mid-day, the time of the day when he
remains really busy doing dusting and cleaning. Not that guests don’t visit the
Johnson’s mansion during mid-day, but these guests weren’t worth any more
explanation or attention, he concluded.
About an
hour later, a bulky brown-haired Mr. Johnson, not more than forty by
appearance, painter by profession, wearing a mulberry silk overcoat, walked
down the stairs, smoking a Sobranie. Relieved at the sight of this arrival, the
woman and her five-year-old daughter, his two guests entered the hall. This was
their fourth visit in the Johnson’s mansion with the same purpose. The woman
was in a rugged woven gown, minimally stitched from the sleeves. The little
girl’s clothes were better off than her mother’s; she had an expressive blank
stare in her young eyes, which screamed deeper turbulence than the mysterious
ocean. It was similar to something else in the room.
“I am here
to collect the wages that was due to Patrick. He is down with small pox and can
hardly move. The nearest hospital is about fifty kilometres from the slum and
travelling and admission will cost us a large fortune. It would be really
helpful to us if you paid us his dues.”, said the woman, repressing the sobbing
undertone that had started popping up in her voice.
“O yes I am
yet to figure out Patrick’s accounts, along with two more of my butlers and my
gardener. I’ll do it once I get time. You know I have a huge important deal
coming up tomorrow that requires all my attention. O I have got a call to
attend. I beg your leave for today,”, Mr. Johnson left hastily, hardly
completing the statement. The woman turned to leave, dejected for the fourth
time in this unsuccessful mission of collecting her ill husband’s dues.
Mr. Johnson
though, was not lying. He actually had a big business deal coming up that would
yield him a promising sum. On the wall of his huge drawing hall, hung a
painting, an abstract one, oil on canvas. It wasn’t framed well, but the
mesmerizing painting had an understated charismatic charm to it. The painting
was a story, in which the colours and the strokes blended in harmoniously to
create a raw imagery of the mind of the painter, the master storyteller. It was
this painting that Mr. Johnson was about to sell to the chairman of the biggest
grossing chain of cultural museums in the States for about two hundred thousand dollars. The
deal was finalized and the final monetary transaction was scheduled to take
place the next day.
The next
day, there was immense commotion at the Johnson’s mansion. The cops had come
in, started investigating as the Police Commissioner spoke to Mr. Johnson.
“So you say
the painting was here last night when you checked in?”
“Yes Sir,
it was right here…as I woke up this morning, it was gone!”, Mr. Johnson
replied, his voice hoarse from crying and shouting all morning. The officer
noted all details in his diary and was about to leave when Mr. Johnson said,
“Sir you need to find out my painting at the earliest. It is one of my most
valued creations. It took me about a month to finish the painting. I was about
to sell it for two hundred thousand dollars to the Smithsonian American Art Museum. It’s worth
more than a lifetime to me.”
As the
Commissioner was about to leave, a junior constable came in and whispered
something to him. His expression changed into a confused one. He instructed Mr.
Johnson that the latter should accompany him to the field. They all got into the police car
and drove to the field beside the slum. Mr. Johnson looked perplexed. Have they found out about the painting? He thought. His thoughts were shaken by a sudden jerk, which indicated the car's reaching it's destination, after a thirty minutes drive. As they
got off the car, Mr. Johnson could spot his visitors from the previous day at
the field. As they got nearer, he saw that beside the woman, on the ground,
there was a long patch of soil, darker than it’s surroundings, on which two
twigs were planted, making a cross shape.
“Patrick
died last night. His condition had got worse. Before we could accumulate some
people from the slum to ask for help, it was all over. We could not afford a
proper coffin for him. But in order to bury him, we needed something that was
close to Patrick’s heart. That was when Susanna went running and brought
something…”, she stopped at this, grasping for breath and hope. Five-year-old
Susanna sat beside where her father lay buried.
That was
when Mr. Johnson and the officer spotted a little triangular outgrowth in the
soil beside the burial ground. The police’s team dug up the soil to find out it
was Mr. Johnson’s two hundred thousand dollars worth painting; it was buried with its corner
stuck up the ground.
“Susanna
brought this painting last night…”
Before she
could complete her statement, the Commissioner turned to Susanna, whose face
did not even register a slight convulsion. On the contrary, she continued
staring at her father’s burial ground with the same ardent stare.
“Why did
you steal Mr. Johnson’s painting, girl?”, asked the Commissioner.
“O she
can’t answer, she’s mute since birth…”, said Susanna’s mother.
Susanna’s
eyes had resemblance to the painting. They shared the same tempestuous clarity,
voicing a lot of raw emotions, as if screaming out loud everything that was
unjustified. The colours of the painting somewhat faded into turbulent sea of emotions
those pair of eyes withheld.
The
Commissioner picked up the painting. The small signature at it’s right bottom
corner read “Patrick K. Jonas”.
Bhalo hoyeche.
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DeleteVery well written. Captures a gamut of human emotions. The title of the story could also have been 'The Revenge.'
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